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Eye of insanity

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I think the idea is very creative. I like the white tendrils winding themselves around the person. A few things about them in a mo. I love the eye shape itself, it's really realistic, including the minimal amount of color that is around it to add to it. I don't know if this was meant to be like that, but I think the toes are too thin at the base and are a little unrealistically spread out. Maybe that was your point, I'm not sure. The fingers on the hanging hand are also a little to thin at the base and too thick at the tips. Her overall shape seems more or less realistic looking, but I think the arm that's hanging down is a little strangely put. The shoulder seems too high and awkward. Maybe that was the point. I dunno. The other arm also seems to be in a very awkward position. I know she's supporting the other lid, but it seems really really strange.

Sorry, I can be a rather harsh critiquer. I hope this helped in some way.